Wings of Fire - OC Ratings

-Sunstorm-

For @MagicalThangs

Time period: like year 12 of the Great War

Sweet

Name: Sunstorm

I, don't think that's a normal SandWing name. Like, they're named after desert related things, and, Sunstorm isn't even a real thing

Name meaning: none

Figures

Nicknames: Sunshine Jackal

They seem, fair I guess, though pretty basic

Nickname meaning: Her best friend calls her sunshine and her mom calls Sunstorm her little Jackal

Fair enough

Sexuality: straight

Blah, HeTeRoS. Jk, straight is cool

Age: 8

Seems a little young for her rank. She'd been about, 15 years maturity?

Gender: female

Lmao, like most OCs in this fandom

Tribe: sandwings

They aren't the most common but I see them around a lot, either way, cool!

Queen of Allegiance: Blister

I guess that's fair, probably the first OC I've seen supporting Blister (who isn't some evil edgelord at least)

Powers: she is an animus and has the power to control her enimies minds during battle

Whoa whoa whoa whoa whoa. She can do WHAT NOW? CONTROL HER ENEMIES MINDS? IN BATTLE? H O W. I'm not a fan of the animus trope either, but at least that's a thing. That exists. In the WoF series. There is NO SUCH THING as a dragon controlling their enemies minds in battle! It's IMPOSSIBLE. And VERY VERY OP. ESPECIALLY since she is an ANIMUS as well

Personality: Sunstorm is very serious when it comes to what she does, but if the time is right she might joke around. She is very creative in finding new ways to do her job and very independent. Although she can can be very closed if about her emotions and has a very unstable and explosive temper. She is very respected and hates being controlled.

It's a bit. Bland. Like, yeah, some people are mainly serious but joke around sometimes, but it's a really common OC trait and is generally pretty boring. I feel like the creative part was forced in, because it doesn't really, work, with any of her other traits. And 'very respected' isn't a personality trait, I should add, I feel it was tossed it to try lengthen it. Her explosive temper is good though! Being explosive isn't a common trait, and it's super cool!

Religion:none

Yeet fair

Fears: he mother being disappointed in her, oddly enough heights and most importantly she scared of going insane from using her powers to much.

Hmm, they seem fair enough, but, maybe add, more? Like, I know three seems like a lot, but I personally have like, at least ten phobias. Most people have a lot of fears, even if they were raised not to

Likes: she loves her pet cobra Sizzle and her mother with all her heart she like having arguments settled with blood being shed. She secretly loves cake!

Hmmmmmmmmmm. Idk of cake is a thing in Pyrrhia. Meh. Regardless, this is quite short, and although these are mainly pretty good, maybe add more things? The part about settling arguments in blood is sort of getting a biiiit edgy there. But I guess it does make sense with her explosive temper, and lets be fair, we all have at least one emo character anyway