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Way better than my first story. VAMPIRES. OFFICIALLY. MAKE. AWESOME. FEEDBACK. WHICH. US. AUTHORS. LOVE. LIKE. CRAZY. :)
Nowww Chapter 3 doesn't get any more dramatic, but I promise the next few. Dang this stuff. Will. Rock. Your. World. :D
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Anywayss.. ooh and you should DEFINITELY listen to this song called I will Possess your Heart by Death Cab for Cutie. Intro.. is just like the smile you see at the end. :) ANYWAYS I LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS SONG. AND TOTALLY LOVE TAHU FOR RECOMMENDING IT. :)
PS, Poppata, THANK YOU FOR THE INSPIRATION OF PLOT, I'D HAVE NO IDEA WHAT I'D DO WITHOUT YOU, DEAR. :) THIS CLIFFHANGER CHAPTER IS DEDICATED TO YOU. THANK YOU SOO MUCH FOR MAKING AN ANALOGY WITH THIS STORY SO FAR AND GOLD.
Okay, I'll stooppp with the rambling. :) And do read, this chappie IS quite interesting.
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Olivia's POV
I was happy to have such a nice friend as Diana.
She always thought I just never was down. Trouble is, she didn't know how well I could act.
Halloween was a memory of horrors. Not random ghosts or that crap. Seeing a loved one getting their lives sucked out of them, was what I had to endure when I was barely 8 years old. When that day Diana wasn't in town, she had gone on a vacation with her parents to London.
She never did find out what happened that gory night.
I remember it as if it were yesterday. I gulped back tears, today would be his death anniversary. But after visiting several psychologists, who believed I was imagining things, I was just supposed to go with the story that my elder brother, Mark had gone off to university, after having an argument with my parents and vowing never to contact us.
Oh, yeah. Mark would definitely do something like that. Mark, the brother who got arrested for a night for punching a teacher after discovering him molest a girl he hated with passion.
That Mark. I wanted to laugh hysterically.
My parents broke down after his disappearance. They didn't understand why he had left. My story scared them even more.
"You okay?" Di asked, her voice breaking apart my emotional bundle of sorrow and disbelief.
Why would someone bite another person? And how with so much force that he bled? And the sickest bit? Why would she suck the blood out of the person, right after their great experience of sex together.
Yes, Samantha Webber had done this to my brother. And after carrying Mark to goodness knows where, she disappeared too. Acting as if she didn't know what she had done. The cruel, cruel bitch.
Now, I'm convinced that she was on ecstasy and steroids. You just can't do that if you were normal.
"Huh, sorry?" I heard myself mumble to Diana, looking up at her.
"Well, like I was saying earlier, a certain Teodor Gaudet was looking at you with such intensity I just had to smile with glee." she giggled.
"Oh my god.. you're kidding!" I laughed. The idea was just ridiculous.
"Nuh-uh." she smirked. "Told you you were more gorgeous than me."
I rolled my eyes. We had a constant argument about who was more beautiful. Immature, I guess, but at least we weren't arguing about better Mac lipstick shades.
I watched Teodor, with all of his 6'3 height and gorgeous bulk of muscle. Oh crap.. he WAS gazing at me as if I were prey and he predator. Strange analogy, but I watched him with confusion. We weren't in any classes together... he was a senior and had never uttered to me a word, so why was he..?
Maybe he likes you, a gleeful voice in my head sang.
Shut up, I said back.
God I hated being a Gemini. The split personality stuff? All true.
You shut up, it said back.
Then I realized, his eyes were a deep maroon. (Sorry to Abigail, but I had to take the idea of eye emotions. Credits to you though.) He had sea green eyes, I'm sure of it. Contacts? But then again, they were flashing from the original color I'd assumed he had AND maroon. Holy mama, those were awesome contacts!
Now, I realized as Diana had left my side to give us some privacy, he was right in front of me, just a foot away. I glanced to see Diana at the porch of the Hammond house, taking some candy in her basket and turned back to Teodor.
"I need to talk to you." Teodor's voice broke in. God, it was so sexy and low.
"Sure," I smiled, hoping that I wasn't blushing for my awkwardness. It was embarrassing enough standing in front of him, he examining my revealing dress. I honestly hope that nothing too perverted was going through his mind. Unconsciously, I gripped the fork tighter.
"Somewhere.. more private, if you don't mind?" he added.
I gulped, and every instinct I had shouted no. It seemed too good to be true.
But I nodded.
An eerily strange smile rested now on his lips. Like that of a stalker or something.
What had I gotten myself into?!
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Trick Or Treat
VampiroDiana White has lived in Popponaw since she was born. Her best friend Olivia Li, joins her in living an average simple nice boring life, until the Gaudets come along. Lucas. Teodor. Baldric. All amazingly gorgeous three brothers, mysterious, young...