This is obviously not a chapter. But I got an important question for who will answer.
This is my first book. I kinda want it to be really good eventually. Any pointers to add or change. Ya know.
It might take some of the suspense out of it for those who answer. But I might try to add an extra surprise or two to spice it up a little.
Again, I would love to get some pointers.
~Thanks
