Im new ish to writing story's but this is the first romance i have done. criticism is welcome so I can improve for the next one.
Chapter 1 first day
It was marks first day at greenwood academy he was nervous but ready for his new school. He was expelled from the last one for braking a bully's jaw (he had it coming ). It was his last year of secondary then he was off to college. Determined to make his last year a good one he arrived at form two minutes early. "Settle down u fuckers I have a headache" Mr Adams shouted
Mark tapped the girl in front of him on the shoulder she had beautiful black hair
"did he say fuckers" mark whispered.
"ye he's really chilled like that I have him for English" she whispered back
"mark" said mark
"Natalie"she replied
It was this that would form a long lasting friendship or would there be more...
Mark and Natalie walked out of form and along the DT wing there was displays about famous designers and anti bullying week. They burst though the dark wood Doors and were in the old canteen as they carried on down the corridor. Mark mustered up the courage to ask if she wanted to hang out at break Natalie said yes and they agreed to meet at the corner where the library,new canteen and humanity's corridor connect..
