Willow's Wonderful Oneshots (Annie_Moon2001)

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Reviewer: Annie_Moon2001

Author: XanderWillow


Cover: 10/10

The background is really beautiful. On looking at the background, you can actually feel all the emotions radiating off it. The fonts used is just a perfect fit. The text alignment is on point. With all these, I can say that the cover is a perfect fit.

Description/Summary: 9½/10

The description/summary is really good. In my own opinion, I don't think you should really write about yourself here (like inform your readers that you are a newbie writer) since it's meant to be a summary of the books content.

Chapter Review: 9/10

The stories are really heartfelt like promised. I noticed some slight grammar errors. It's not that pronounced but it's there. You claimed to be a newbie writer but I can actually argue that with you because the stories are really well written. The descriptions are really vivid. While reading, it felt like I was actually drawn into the book and was watching it live. At some point, it felt like I was reading a poem with the whole rhyming. Anyways, among all the stories, I love the second story the most, Don't Stop For War.

Activity of the Writer: 7½/10

The writer rarely replies to messages In her comment box but replied to all messages on her conversation board.

Plot: 10/10

I don't have much to say here since I've said it all in the chapter review. The stories are really interesting and very creative. They're all quite heart touching. All the emotions a story is supposed to have is complete in each of the stories. In short, the stories are really packed. I highly recommend this book to all wattpaders.

Overall Advice:

I have nothing much to say here. I'll just advice that you edit the story and always endeavour to reply to all comments.

That all aside, I'll rate this book a 10/10.


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