Author's Note

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Hey guys, since this is my very first time to publish the story that goes in my mind, (well, it is my second time to think of this kind of a story), please let me know if the flow of the story is okay. Or it goes too boring, it has more drama or it is very unrealistic.

Please help me guys.

Suggestions and critiques are very much appreciated. 

Thank you.

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