Trust the timing of your life

The fight

The ride to Glasgow took me fiveteen minutes, twenty minutes less than the usual ride.

I was panicking the entire time, my sister was missing with a supposedly best-friend  of hers along with him.

Will he kill her? Commit suicide right after Is this a trap? Am I going crazy? Yes, you are talking to yourself when is this never labelled as crazy? umm. everyone talks to themselves.

The entire ride to Glasgow I just talked to myself, my parents called checking on me and to see whether I found Oliver or not.

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Olive's POV

Here I was sitting down on a cold chair waiting for my brother to come and rescue me.

I felt bad...Freddie was going to die today, in the church of Glasgow.

John was crazy, he was also the pastor and he has chemicals in his den.

"Honey, how are you?"

John asked me, from behind. I hated that voice of his thinking that he could just come in on my life, kill my brother and use me as bait.

"I am fine." I said, in disgust. I spit at him right after smiling.

"How dare you! I will go into the mode that you do not wanna see!" He said glaring at me, I knew what he was saying and knew that he was crazy enough to do it.

"Please!," I yelled pretending ti beg, "Ooh, I am so scared." I finished off and chuckled lightly to myself.

You may think that I am crazy or stupid but, trust me, I got a plan.

As he untied me, I gathered all my power to hit him but he saw my blow and punched me breaking my nose. I do care that my nose was bleeding or that it was painful, I just want to get myself to safety.

Not seeing him, he went from behind me and grabbed me by the neck tossing me onto a bench. He got ontop of me and that is when I knew. I knew that I am going to have to use the self-defence that was thought to me in school, a year ago.

As he came ontop of me I nudged him to the floor, he quickly stood up and looked at me. Thrusting himself at me, I lifted my back-making an arch under it to keep him off of me. I then lifted one of my legs making him fall down on the floor. He looked hurt, but I could not have helped him it would have been too easy for him.

As I got up off the bench and started running I felt his hands on my feet, I turned around while jumping and felt my feet on his hands.

They were crushed.

I started running away and towards the door when I saw someone at the doorway smiling, I ran to him and hugged him...thinking that he was my brother, John was behind me and I felt them both tighten the gap on me. Was I about to go two on one with them? Were they going to kill me?

Author's note:

I hope that it was not too long or too short and wish that the cliffhanger was stopped at the right moment.

Who do you think is at the doorway? A bad or good guy? Freddie or someone else?

Do you think that this book is going in the right direction?

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