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and I rewrote the Beginning of the story because I read it again and it sucked lol so if you thought it was bad also I fixed it!! so go reread it if you would like
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i opened my eyes... Grey walls surrounded me. The tv was turned on to some movie I'd never seen. I didn't know if it was daytime or not. there was no windows. The purple bed spread flowed around me . Am I dreaming?
i didnt remember anything from last night... i sat up ad immediately felt pains in my right side i gasped .. i pulled up my hirt and saw the bloodstained gauze rapped around me.
i slowly unrapped it and saw a big bloody hole the size of my thumb it looked like a gunshot.. wait i got shot whenin the hell did that happen?
it looks like I had stitches... the iv in my arm confirmed thag I had been treated
sudenly all of the memories came flooding back... oh my god ive been kidnapped
i started crying i didt know wht i was going to do.. i cant sta here what about my family. what about brad....
I tried to get up but winced in pain.. I couldn't move the pain was unbearable. Sharp pains shot through the right side of my body
I need to get out of here I tried to scream but no words would come out I struggled to make some noise but I just couldn't.
I dont know what to do I can't move I can't speak. All I could do was think why me? Why now ?
A loud noise interrupted my thoughts
The door swung open
YOU ARE READING
Kidnapped
Mystery / ThrillerMakenzie was just a regular 16 year old girl with a great life but her best friend who she is in love with wants to go to a party. but things go wrong and she goes missing