Best of bad Choices

A new beginning

It all started when I was small pup, Not knowing what was about to happen. It was about 2:00am when I herd the yelping of my brothers and sisters. I got up confused, looking for my mom and dad. They were outside with something. That something was hurting my parents. All I could do was stare.

Unable to move due to my fear. I finally talked "w-what are we going t-to do...?" I said. All of my bothers and sisters where wide eyed and shocked. I walked out due to no more yelping. I saw the blood stained grass there were two wolves with deer skull on the head, hovering over the too none moving bodies.

I ran over to theme now knowing it was my was my parents, covering there whole bodies where Scratch marks. There necks had huge gaping holes of almost black(because it's was night). I was shocked. Then they noticed me. They emerged from the darkness behind my parent bodies. Then they knocked me out cold. I awoke to the sounds of birds chirping. I was on someone's back with another pup who was black and white striped all on there body. I could tell it was none of my siblings...

So I uh well hoped you enjoyed the first part of this story uh I know the grammar is pretty bad but please just hang on there I'm only 11. Anyway please comment about what I should change about my story if there something you don't like just tell I'll see what I can do about it. =D