Blessings and betrayal

Introduction

The story is about a girl name Gysel who is the daughter of a drug lord but she doesn't see her father that much because he works a lot growing up she was with her Nanny Laura after Gysel graduation her father gets shots by his brother nino. Nino thought if he killed his brother then all his money and everything goes to him, none of Jeremiah's family knew he had a daughter that's the way he wanted it to be so if something happened to him they wouldn't come after his daughter, Gysel 18th birthday was coming up and all her father legal businesses was hers and she started revealing things about her fathers past and her mothers who had ran away to be with her dads brother miles. Growing up Gysel grew to love Laura like she was her own mother. In Laura eyes Gysel was her daughter nobody could tell her different, she thought it was a blessing from god because the doctors told her she couldn't have children , watching Gysel grow up to a fine young lady was her dreams coming true.
Chapter one will be posted later after i make a few changes this only the start to something.
I'm new to this writing a book so bare with me 😭 i promise not to let y'all down. Just give me feedback on what i can improve on to make myself a better writer. I hope you enjoy the story
~nillydthewriter~