*these are just some snapshots of things that might end up in the story. This is just to help me dig deep into who my main character, Blythe Garner, is
Description sentence: Petite as she was, she was a fierce little woman. Broken on the inside, but never let it show through her beautifully tanned skin as she walked the halls with her head held high and her hair running down her back perfectly straight.
Character speaking to Blythe: "You can't keep trying to drown out your pain because you know that when you come back down you're just going to feel worse than you did before."
Blythe speaking & revealing some about herself: "Even so, I need to reach those highs, because I feel greAt when I'm up there and I know that when I come crumbling down he'll be there to catch me. Even though it hurts, at least I have him there."
Character speaking to Blythe revealing why she can't commit to Sylas: "If you really want him as badly as you say you do, then why don't you just commit when he's right there waiting for you?" -outside character
"Because if I say yes then he gets me. When I say yes, he takes a piece of me. When he takes a piece of me I would have to trust that he wouldn't ruin that piece of me. Even if he promises he'd never hurt me, it could still happen. You can't promise the future, and when he breaks that piece of me I won't ever get it back to the way it used to be. I'm just scared that I won't be able to handle that kind of pain."- Blythe
"Then you need to let him go, because if you truly love him then you'd want him to be happy and you can't make him happy if you can't trust that he loves you back." -outside character
"What if I don't want to lose him, though?"-Blythe
"Then trust him and say yes before it's too late."-outside character
"I think it already is too late. He's been talking to Evelyn again."-Blythe
"Does he seem happy?"-outside character
"Very"-Blythe
"Then let him go, he deserves this, and you need to find yourself before you try to find a relationship."-outside character
YOU ARE READING
Goodbye For the Last Time
Teen Fiction"Deep down she knew that this time she wasn't getting him back." **based off of "When The Party's Over" by Billie Eilish, written by Finneas O Connel
