I can wright much better that this, but I did not go through this as throughly as I usaly do.
Any how, This is my test run. I will try anser coments when I have time between my school and the hospital, but I make no guarantee of such. Please Enjoy.
I claim This story, the situations, and the name.
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Falconir - Fal-con-ear - Warrior or apprentice to the Viue.
Selni - Sell-ne - Species of butterfly winged humanoids.
The young Falconir observed the two Selni guards as they paced back and forth, watching as they glanced towards the sky and the treetops above them, both nervous and tense. There featherless wings swayed with the breeze, each pair dusted and properly cared for to Selni standards.
His own wings were thrown back in irritation; tawny feathers ruffled underneath the wing bracers he had equipped on them. The scent of unease had been strong enough to reach him from his perch above the guards, making him twitchy and anxious and taking wide-eyed glances behind and below him - even if he knew nothing of worry was near enough to prey on him.
'How are we to make peace,' he thought with distaste, his eyebrows furrowed 'if they believe we are untrustworthy even in our creating of it!'
And indeed they were, even as he waited, it was happening, his people and the Selni were to making peace to rise against a common enemy.
It mattered little that the Viue used to prey of the Selni, they would all fall victim of the enemy if they did not make all that was wrong right within their people.
To be continude~
End~
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