SOO This is sort of a sneak peek of the upcoming story, I'm writing. This is my first fanfic so comments are appreciated!! :) xx
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Why do I always get lost in those blue eyes? Everyday, those eyes would start to change. I turn my head and look at the sunset in the far distance.
"It's so beautiful, isn't it?" I asked Louis, my best friend.
"Yes, you are." I turn my head and Louis' staring at me, right in my soul. He looks at my lips then back into my eyes. He leans closer to my face and I meet him in the middle. Our lips almost touching. I can feel his minty breathe on my lips. I decided to close our distance and we kissed for the first time.
When our lips touched, everything turned to black. All the focus was on me and Louis, around us fireworks were bursting. Louis backed away and smiled.
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FanfictionOnce upon a time, there was a magical kingdom... HOLD UP! This story isn't about a magical kingdom, but about an average girl named Jamie. Jamie Feest gets bullied and also get abused by her father. She meets young Louis Tomlinson on a park bench an...
