Writers noit i have changed how im going to write thos story and plz tell me if there is eny mistakes and if there is eny thing you want in the story
Keitys pov
I felt shiros lips on my body goung further down i wrap my arm's around his neck just as it was feting good there was a knock at the door .
Shiros pov
I'll get it ok i say as keith and i get changed i open the door to see hunk lance and pige Hi guys what are yous doing here i ask u and keith want to go to a party pidge askes wile lance begs Ok ok Keith and i will go what time 9pm dont be late bye Who was that i here keith ask it was pidge and lance asking us to go to a party for be ready by 9pm ok
Keiths pov
Sheiro!!! You know i hate parties I shouted well come on keith just one party wont hurt you ok cupcake shiro says to me ok fine but I'll pick what i will were Kk love u cupcake
This is what keith wore
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Not my art btw
Is this ok i say as shiro go's all red y-Yeah that's good vome on lets go now
Shiro pov
Oh got i want to fuck him ahh stop it pervert side i thought to myself
We get to the park and set out a blanket it was nice the sky was a beautiful coulers
