Patricks Surprise

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Pov:Patrick

I'm nervous but ready I'm going to propose to my baby girl the love of my life Shar. So my brothers are going to help me were going to sing All I Do as she walks in. The girls are going to disappear to leave Shar all by herself at the walk way of the house.

Kelly: Dude this looks amaxing her face is going to light up witg joy.

Bryan: I'm so proud of you bro finally stepping up to the plate 

Carnell: This going to make her so happy

Dustin: Must of all she deserves it after everything you to been through together.

Patrick: Thanks Bros I love y'all.

Bryan: Hey they pulled up get in positions.

Patrick: Okay lets get ready.

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Pov:Shar

We pull up to the the Breeding residents its werid because none of us live here anymore. Its just Miss Adrian. Everyone started acting funny when we got closer to the door.

Shar: Are all okay

Cindy: We're good.

So as I walked in first I didn't see anyone anymore its like they disappeared. Then I saw my baby girl Ariel crawling on the floor towards me she had a note tapped to her back. I pick here up and read note. It said; baby girl are you ready walk in all the way. So I did I saw Patrick with roses in his hand he put one in my hair and hand them to Carnell. Bryan took the baby from me as Patrick took my hands and held them in his. I felt butterflies in my tummy.

Patrick: I love I know I put you through a lot but you continue to be my rock and I wanna make you happy.

Then I hear melody to All I Do and Dustin start his part then Patrick start singing with tears running down his face. I fell in love with him all over again. With the man I call my baby my one and only true love. Its hard to believe that we made it this far. The song ended we were both crying now.

Patrick: Shar I love you, you are my world my rock my queen my life. Would you do me me the honors of being my wife.

Shar: Yes

It amazing how you can love one person for years and never get tired of them I believe in us I hope that we continue to believe in us to. This story was written by a girl seeing this  similar situation happen but with a little less drama. I add in a lot of stuff from my own experience of love and happiness. But my story is just starting. I may not have a love life like the one I written about but it was fun writing this story. I hope you all enjoyed it stay tune there might be a part 2.

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