Ğosh Äre Ýou? Pt 14

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Peeps I hope you are reading this. I uploaded 6 chapters already and have not received any feedback whats so ever. So after confirming it with a friend he told me the last part that it shows is chapter 16 which is wrong. I uploaded to 23 already. So as a test I have only uploaded my first draft of 17 which is only half of it I will not release  the whole chapter till I receive confirmation that you have received this. Please leave a comment at the end if you have. Thanks for your help.

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Chapter 17: Who Am I?

     Please.

     It can't be true.....

     Why him....

      I'm gonna kill him....

     10 minutes earlier

      The cool breeze moves through the tree's my wet damp clothes sticking to me; cold as ice. I look to my left and spot a bunny hopping through the foliage stirring up the the nature living in it the bugs spiral up towards the sky and disappear into the tree limbs. I continue to slink to the area where I last saw Rick. "Jaz I don't know what to do after this. Thanks to the bastard who's stalking Rick; Courtney is dead this asshole took my father and got my bestfriend killed!!!" Jaz silently nods in agreement.  "Well aren't you gonna say anything?"

      "Your venting it's best if I let you do it without my input." I nod at that argument "yeah, yeah that's a good idea I probably wasn't gonna listen anyways."  Jazz nods in agreement. "You like nodding dont you?" Another nod. I laugh,"I'll take that as a yes." We continue our march down the bank and reach the spot where I left Rick, but Rick is not there. I grow alarmed and frantically dart my eyes around the area. "Rick?! RICK!!! WHERE ARE YOU!"

    

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