This story using honour of my amazing friend, Edith- my Wishfeather
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The sun streamed through the trees into River clan camp, Wishpaw scampered out of the apprentice den to see Ravenwing walking over to greet her. "Hi Ravenwing, how's life as a warrior?" Wishpaw meowed.
"It's good," replied Ravenwing.
A sandy brown warrior padded over to Wishpaw. "Violetshine," Wishpaw greeted, as she dipped her head respectfully at the deputy.
"Wishpaw it's your naming ceremony today," said Violetshine.
Wishpaw meowed intently, as her mother licked her fur.
"Oh I'm sooo excited," she said happily "I'm gonna be a warrior like you Ravenwing!"
Ashstar leaped upon the highledge smoothly, as Wishpaw walked to the front. "All cats older enough to catch there own prey, meet beneath the highledge for a clan meeting," Ashstar yowled.
Slowly warriors and apprentices gathered beneath the highledge, including Ravenwing who sat herself with Cloudwisp and Hollyoaks. Wishpaw fidgeted excitedly.
"We are gathered here today, because Wishpaw has reached the age of six moons, and is ready to become a warrior," meowed Ashstar.
"Wishpaw, you have trained hard to understand the ways of the warrior code, by the power of Star clan I give you your warrior name, from this moment on ,Wishpaw you will be known as Wishfeather."
"Wishfeather Wishfeather!"chanted the crowd.
The crowd of cats slowly cleared of and Wishfeather bounced over to Ravenwing, "I can't believe I get to sleep in the warriors den with you two," she meowed to Ravenwing and Cloudwisp.
"Wishfeather," started Cloudwisp "it's not that fun, all the senior warriors boss you around".
"It's not that bad, plus not all the senior warriors are bossy. Hollyoaks isn't," said Ravenwing.
"Anyway you two should probably get some rest, I have to sit vigil," meowed Wishfeather.****
Wishfeather woke early next morning, to Ravenwing prodding her. "Your supposed to be sitting vigil, not sleeping!"
Wishfeather stirred awake "What?"
"You better go to the warriors den to get some rest, " meowed Ravenwing.
Wishfeather slumped sleepily into the warriors den.
"Ow, watch it," yowled a familiar voice. And Cloudwisp walked out, huffing. Wishfeather layed herself down.
"Wishfeather treaded on my tail," said Cloudwisp.
"She's so tired, you can't blame her," meowed Ravenwing. Wishfeather slowly fell asleep.
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