Plz comment on my book, I need to improve my writing skills. Any comments, good or bad would be great.
Ps. Sorry for the slow updates.
I'm unpublishing again to fix any problems. Sorry and plz don't kill me in your minds
Having some problems with my rewrite. I'll fix when and where I can. For now just keep commenting.
TX guys&gals

YOU ARE READING
(REWRITING*) JOCK'S SECRET
Fantasyfurry vladdy_OwO is helping with corrections. This is a shout out for him-> TX MAN!!!! Triceratops_Furry. TX for the help man!! Thank you to all my lovely readers!! Your the best people ever!