Promises [Louis Tomlinson]

Chapter 5-Part 2- Parties over

           As I watched Fiona and Nate leave the club I knew something must be going wrong.  I looked over to Harry he looked a bit tipsy not completely comprehending the situation.  I knew if I wanted to find out what was going on I would have to go by myself.  I walked to the exit.  Girls throwing themselves at me.  

Fiona's POV

            I felt a sharp pain across my cheek, the tears streaming down my face.  He then pushed me into the brick wall, winding me.  I collapsed to the floor, gasping for air.  When I finally caught my breathe.  I felt his shoes come in contact with the side of my face.  I tried to scream but his hand covered my mouth, squeezing hard.  I saw his lips move but the sound was distant.  He raised his fist up.  I closed my eyes waiting for the impact, but it never came.  His grip on my mouth was suddenly gone.  I could only feel the cold.  Was I dead?  Surprisingly I wasn't afraid, I was relieved for a moment, but then I heard shouting.  I tried to open my eyes a bit.  I saw feet and looked up a bit letting out a groan.  I saw Louis's face, his nose was bleeding.  "Louis, please." he looked down at me his eyes full of tears.  "Fiona?"  Nate then threw a punch at him.  "Stay away from her.  She's mine!"  he fell backwards.  I struggled getting up, I needed to help him.  I finally got to my feet every inch of my body screaming at me.

          Nate was about to punch him when I got in the way.  I fell but Louis caught me.  I blinked trying to focus my view.  "I'm sorry." I said to Louis.  The black dots were appearing.  They were everywhere  now.  I felt my body hit the cold floor lightly.  I was drifting slowly from the world.  Is this what dying felt like?  The distant voices.  I suddenly heard an Irish accent guessing that it was Niall.  I felt arms wrap around me.  I opened my eyes much as I can,  Niall was holding me, Zayn beside him.  There mouths were moving but the sound was distant,  i then looked over to Louis who was being held back by Liam and Harry.  I heard the distant sound of sirens and Nate was running.  The black dots were appearing again.  "Please." I tried saying but it came out in a slur.  The dots were everywhere I couldn't help it, I felt tired all of a sudden.  The world just went black.

     

 Hey guys,  I'm sorry that the chapter is so short I just thought I should leave it on a bit of a cliff-hanger so you know.  I hope you enjoyed it and leave an honest opinion at the bottom please.