Young agent

Chapter 6

Maddie's POV

I wake up and panic. Where am I. I start to hyperventilate. The door opens and JJ walks in. She sees me and rushes to me.

"Calm down sweetie. Match my breathing. In. Out. Good." She says. I calm down. "Are you hungry Maddie?" She asks. I nod my head.

Walking downstairs I see a man and a little boy. I almost freak out but see how nice he is with the kid. "Maddie this is Will my husband and Henry my son." She tells me who they are.

Sitting down I say hi to them. JJ handed me a plate with food on it. To be honest it looks really really good. It have pancakes, bacon, sausage, eggs, and home fries.

You see I barely ate at home or at school so this was like heaven. After I ate all of it I asked JJ," What happens now?" "Well, your parents are going to jail and I was hoping that you would let Reid or I to adopt you." I think she saw my hesitation when she said Reid so she continued," Reid is harmless. He couldn't hurt a fly even if he wanted to." I laugh at that.

"How did he get into the FBI then?" I ask. "He's very smart but, I think you beat him." She said laughing. "Do you have to go to work?" She nods. "Can I come? I don't want to stay inside on such s beautiful day and I don't fully trust Will. Sorry." I look down at the end.

"Will won't hurt you. If he does he'll have to go through me and the team. Ok. You can come to work with me. I think you would like it." She said. We get dressed and walk out the door.

At the BAU

JJ and I walk through the doors an into the where the desks are (I don't know what they are called). I see Emily and run to her attacking her in a hug. I haven't seen her in forever.

They all laugh at the movements. I think Hotch even smiled. After saying hi to everyone I go back to JJ." I brought me bag with the work in it. Can I work somewhere?" I ask. She nods and bring me into the meeting room. I thank her.

Spreading out all of my work and the photos I continue working on this. I'm in my zone that I don't realize people came in. Feeling like someone's watching me, I turn around. I see everyone there.

"Oh. Can I help you?" I ask them. "Is this the kidnapping case?" Morgan asks. I nod," I've been working on it since last Friday." I go back to work. Looking at the photos and evidence I'm slowly putting the pieces together and my profile fits.

"What do you have so far." Hotch asks. "I do have a working profile. Would you like to hear it?" They nod.

"All  of the victim have blonde hair, blue eyes, being young, small, have kids, and being active. The unsub kidnaps them at night. Holds them for 4 days then kills them. Obvious signs of overkill. They are patient but angry. Takes them after work. No signs of sexual abuse so, it's not what drives them. All the victims have no criminal records but, they have been in the system at one point. The way the kills are points to a male unsub. They're sloppy, not organized, he's having a breakdown. Most likely going to try to get someone soon. He needs to have control in his life. With the victims being women with children, he's probably been in the system and mistreated or abused by a female or mother figure."

I tell them this while I'm looking at the autopsy reports. I look up and see them shocked. "What? Something wrong about it?" I ask a little worried. This knocks Hotch, Morgan, Rossi out of the daze. "No. Nothings wrong. The profile looks spot on. How long did it take you to come up with it?" Rossi asked.

"About the time of the 3rd kidnapping and murder. I didn't have enough evidence to make one thoroughly." I shrug it off. They look impressed.

"Is there anything else you need?" I ask. They say no then leave. I pull out my computer and log into a database that basically nobody knows about. I plug in the information I have and 2 names pop up. Ones dead the other lives here.

Looking more i look into him, The more I realize he fits and is possibly the killer. I run into JJ's office and find her not busy.

"JJ I think I solved it. I think I found the killer." I say handing her the paper with the information on John White. She looks over it and thinks back to the profile and she thinks I'm right.

"We'll hand this to Hotch and see what he wants to do," she said. I say ok. After giving it to Hotch he says we should go check it out.

Everyone heads to the cars even me. I have to stay in the car obviously.

At John White's property

We get there and we have a warrant. I stay in the car while they go out. About 5 minutes later I hear yelling on the opposite side of the car not near the house.

I take my taser, handcuffs, and a flashlight with me and check it out. I get to where the screams are and see a little door on the floor. I open it and see a women and a girl.

I hop down. "Is there anyone else here?" I ask. They say no. "I help them both out of the door and I hear someone behind me. I flash the light and see John White. I tell the girls to run and get to the car for help.

"Why did you go it John?" I ask him. "Why not. They've never been good to me. Why would I be good to them." " John those were not girls from the foster home. John the women who did that to you was arrested years ago." I tell him.

He tries to come at me but I taser him. Turning the taser off I handcuff him. Walking him back to the car, I see the rest of the team looking worried. "So did you get the guy?" I ask with a smirk.

They look over at me and smile. They said no. "That's because Mr. White is right here." I hand them him and walk off to the ambulance to see how the two were doing. They were doing fine and we all went home.

"How did you catch him Maddie?" Reid asked. "I heard screams and checked it out. I had to taser him because he came at he." I tell him. I hear Morgan and Emily laugh. 

We get home and I get ready for bed after dinner and sleep. Today has been an exhausting day.

To be continued....

Thank you for over 50 reads. I thought this would be a flunk. I'm working on updating better.

Love ya
Abby