Naruto: when the night falls (WILL BE REWRITTEN)

Prologue

                                                       Person/someone
                                                               "Talking"
                                                                'Thinking'
                                                       "Jinchuriki talking"
                                                        'Jinchuriki thinking'
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When naruto was 5 years old he was chased by a mob of villigers with a pitchfork and a torch. Naruto run until he was cornerd in a dead end he said "what did i do! I din't do anything" he was crying and a villager said "you killed my dauther and my wife.You demon!" The villager screamed the last part naruto said "i-i din't kill anyone" he was still crying and the villagers got angry and start punching/kicking him while he was still crying and some shinobis showed up naruto thought 'yes please help me' while his was crying he felt something pierce through his skin
He held out his scream and looked at where he felt hurt and saw a kunai there he screamed as his scream travelled through the village some dogs began barking and toddlers began crying because of the scream the villagers got more angry they tied him up and put something in his mouth to keep him quiet they brought him to a storage facility and started burning him and fired jutsus at him but they didn't know someone was watching them.

It was the daughter of Inoichi she saw the villagers burn naruto and she hold her mouth while tears flow down her face she saw they were done she hide somewhere they could not see her after they left she entered where they put naruto is she helped him until he woke up naruto said to her "who are you?! Why did you h-helped me "he was scared and the girl said "I'm ino yamanaka.i thought you needed help"she smiled at naruto. Naruto said while shaking "h-hello my name is n-naruto u-uzumaki" he was nervous.ino asked naruto "why did they do that to you"and naruto said "because they think I'm a demon or the kyūbi"he frowned.ino said "no you're not" she smiled.naruto said "you think so then t-thank you" he smiled
(Okay after this you will get a flash back 5 years ago)
Ino then said "i should get going before my father gets mad at me" and naruto said "okay. Good bye Miss Yamanaka" he smiled.then ino said "call me ino" and naruto said "good bye ... ino" he smiled with a confused look.ino said "goodbye naruto"
They didn't know Inoichi watch them until the end he shushined when they finished saying thier goodbyes

*FLASH BACK 5 YEARS AGO*
Minato was happy because it was the day of the birth of the triplets he didn't knew it was triplets because he was always in the hokage office doing paper work (kage's worst enemy hehehe) he was ready to go meet his thought son alone but it was triplets when the oldest son was born it has black hair the nurse said "it's a boy" Minato was happy and the nurse said "i think there is two more i think" and the daughter was the second born she has yellow hair the nurse said "it's a girl" Minato was excited for the third and the third son was born the nurse said "it's a boy" the third son has yellow hair like his big sister but with whiskers Minato and Kushina was so happy and named thier child Minato said "the first born will be Menma and the second born will be Mito" he was happy then Kushina said "what about the third born Minato?" She asked her husband .but Minato didn't said anything. She was a little furious he didn't cared about the third child and she named the third child. She said "your name  will be naruto" she smiled at naruto.then naruto chuckled alittle.then a masked man took naruto off Kushina's hand she screamed "NOOOOO! Don't. Minato get naruto" Minato put the two in thier cribs and run towards the masked man as he got closed the masked man let go of naruto when Minato catched naruto the masked man got to where Kushina was and took the kyūbi from her 'cause the seal was almost breaking when the masked man took the kyūbi he shushined out of there and attacked konohagakure when Minato got there konoha was on fire some building destroyed and shinobis dead he summoned a giant toad to fight the kyūbi when he was finished he only thought of sealing it in his children he decided the first and second get half of the kyūbi's soul and chakra but Hiruzen said "Minato survive for your children's" as he sealed it to both the first and second born while naruto was sleeping alone in one of the cribs

*WITH KUSHINA*
Kushina remembered she put naruto in one of the cribs she ran to naruto and saw he was crying Kushina got annoyed by the crying of the 'useless' son of his
She spanked naruto to be quiet but it made it worst she though 'ughhhh how can this 'useless'  child be quiet' she covers naruto and didn't see a seal on naruto
(You questioning why he has a seal? Ok i'll put it in)

*WITH NARUTO*
after his 'family' leaves him at the crib he heard a voice but he did not understand what they are talking about cause his a baby he heard someone say "ok i will seal you four in this child because he will have a bad life he will be neglected by his parent's for his twin brother and sister i will ask you four to keep him safe because he is the chosen one" he said at the four.the four said "Hai" then he sealed the four of them inside naruto and disappeared then naruto started crying from the pain coming from the seals no one notice it because it was still making the seal
TBC....
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