Horror/ Paranormal Results!!!

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The scores for Horror/Paranormal stories are down below!! First I will list all the stories then at the end will be the winners!!!!


1. Serenade by JJRothschild

Title: 2

Spooky vibes from the book, but a sweet title?

Cover: 5

Interesting, matches with the main character

Summary/Blurb: 10

Creativity: 10

Characterization: 10

The summary is enticing.

The creativity is top notch, never seen a wattpad book like it.

The characterization is very good, describes him well and is distinct.


2. Psychosis by JMills_

Title: 4.5

Says what the main thought is about, is short and sweet, but is a little to the point.

Cover: 5

Makes me have a possible idea of the girl with psychosis.

Summary/Blurb: 9

Creativity: 9

Characterization: 8

Summary/Blurb: Explains the book, but has a little bit too much detail.


3. Reincarnation by NicoleRxldxn

Title: 5

Short and sweet.

Cover: 5

Fits a horror book well.

Creativity: 8

A subject most wouldn't write about, but it is a little strained. I would say that it is extremely creative but I don't know anything that's happening, it's all scattered around a timeline and I can't make sense of it.

Summary/Blurb: 5

Way too long, hard to follow.

Characterization: 7

She is feistier, but she seems to look perfect, that is overused a lot in books. Can't tell if she has many personality traits other than believed failure and secrecy


4. Not Fallen...Yet by DeliaMaguire6

Title: 5

Cover: 4

What is the cover supposed to be anyways?

Summary/Blurb: 9

Makes me want to read it, but has a couple spelling/grammar errors (uses the word "but" too much in writing as well, is formal sometimes and informal others, I dunno where to mention that)

Creativity:8

A decently unique storyline, I guess.

Characterization:9

Strong characterizing skills.

(Can I minus points for terribly long run-on sentences? It was a whole paragraph of one sentence over and over.)


5. After the End: When Death Comes Calling by NDeMeer

Title: 5

Cover: 5

Looks like a lost/wandering soul and that's what she is

Summary/Blurb: 10

Makes me interested in the plot and has good grammar.

Creativity:10

I really like the plot of this book even in the first two chapters, I've never read anything like it.

Characterization: 10

Her personality is interesting and she doesn't seem to be that ultra pretty girl obsessed with boys like most wattpad characters.


6. El Paraiso by Panos_1112

Title: 4

The Paradise sounds like a cool book, but there are a LOT of books named that.

Cover: 4

It's a cool piece of art.

Summary/Blurb: 9

Interesting, but it's kinda too detailed.

Creativity: 8

An interesting take on Genesis. Turns really dark though.

Characterization: Don't know much about it other than Eve decided to disobey her dad and eat the apple


WINNERS BELOW....

Third place winner: Psychosis by @JMills !!!!!!

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Third place winner: Psychosis by @JMills !!!!!!

Second place winner: Serenade by @JJRothschild !!!!!

First place winner: After the end by NDeMeer !!!!!


Amazing job to all the participants!!!

Amazing job to all the participants!!!

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