Haunted

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2 years later aged 14

I can still remember the screaming as the dauntless troops stormed upon us, people scrambled everywhere searching for cover, somewhere to hide.

I remember it as if it was yesterday. Johnston Daniel's younger brother was held up in the hair by a dark man with tattoos covering his face, screaming out for his parents also captives. I frozen in fear questioning whether to run out to help but I back down. Daniel bless him found the strength to knock down his captive and punch the tattooed man. And then it went off a sharp 'bang' as clear as day, the seconds felt like minutes as Daniel's limp body dropped to the ground. 'Bang' Johnston's followed him.

Earlier (9 hrs)

"Daniel I want to be dauntless, do you think they would let me?" I asked

"I know you do but there is no way there going to accept you El there all evil" he said

"Why do you hate them so much?" I sighed as I clung to his shoulder.

"You haven't seen what I've see where the factionless most those shanks up there would rather be dead than be us. Look El I'm just saying if you go up there they will use and abuse you your disposable to them" he finished walking away seeming quite frustrated.

"Talk to Angelo I'm sure he can do something but I warned you! " " Don't come crawling back to me" he scoffed

" Dan" I cried as he stormed away.

That was the last time we talked!

Aged 15

The choosing ceremony will be taking place for me in a year and a months time exactly and due to Angelo's contacts he had been able to get me in as a Amity ahead of time to raise less suspicion. But I know that was only half the battle I needed to learn how to fight and that's were my new surprise acquaintance came in. I had just been wondering around when I had seen a flash of blue and a boy with short blonde hair punching bags. I had watched him amusing myself in his frustrations. At one point I laughed to loudly and his eyes met mine they were a mix of green and grey they would have been captivating if he wasn't scowling. "Fight me?" I asked he just smirked.

Sorry for the time skips (12 months later)

"Eric really" I scolded as the new dauntless leader attempted to hit a bug into the ground after having just finished are fight.

"What" he said smirking "it's just a bug".

"Exactly that's my point" I said.

"You sure your meant to be dauntless you might do better in Amity" he teased.

"Whatever just don't talk to me" i said snapping my fingers joking as I picked up the bags and dragged them to the hiding spot.

"Anyway the ceremonies coming up you'll be stuck with me bro" I laughed as he scrunched his face up.

"Bro really" I asked giving me a weird look

"Yeah bro cause your like.. Daniel" I had just whispered the last bit while Eric had come to know of my brother in the mere months after we met I didn't won't to bring it up.

"I see you next week" i grabbed my bag and walking off quickly leaving behind a confused Eric.

Sorry it's short I'll post another tomorrow I know eric is out of character but no one really know what he is like when he isn't at dauntless will mood into the man we see in the books. Btw doing the movie version just to be clear.

Please review and tell me if it sucks to badly this is really my first story I've written!! I suck at editing so tell me that too!!

Love ya all

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