Things I very politely hate about Warriors

Typos

Here's the killer. I get it's hard to keep things straight with three of you erin hunters, but I simply don't get how this one made it through the editing process.

"'Cats of ThunderClan' Graystripe began, sounding slightly awkward but determined to have his say, 'I'm so glad I came back to find ThunderClan. I could never had made that journey without Millie, and I was so blessed by a second chance to raise kits' His glance traveled around the clearing, resting on each of his friends in turn. 'I'll never forget Silverstream or Stonefur,' he went on, 'and I can scarcely believe my daughter Mistystar is now daughter of RiverClan'" ~Graystripe, Bramblestar's Storm

In case you missed the typos in there, (I'm sure you're all as disgusted as me)

Stonefur and Mistystar are Bluestar's kits.. And older than Graystripe. At least he got his mate's name right. (Fact: Mistystar and Graystripe are technically related. They're cousins. Go figure.)

Other typos: (Or plain dumb things)

~Rowanstar was freaking she-cat

~For a couple pages in Bluestar's propechy, Shellheart was a she-cat too

~Tawnyspots wasn't tawny, and he didn't have spots.

~Heavystep died three times

~ShadowClan relationships. In Yellowfang's secret, Bright makes a comment about how Nut was Crushing on Fern. Then, Rowan leaves Yellow to go talk to Wolf, who SHE was crushing on. Then Fern has Wolf's kits. (I'm sorry if you don't find this as stupid as I do)

AND MOAR