CHAPTER 6

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WHAT WAS THAT BANG?

As Tom and Carmel screamed after the big bang wondering what was going to happen next.

"W.W.W.Whats h.h.happe.e.ning Tom" whispered Carmel as the wall felt to the comming closer but it was the thing but as Tom started to speak some more writing in blood was getting written on the wall it said.

        YOU ENTERED AT YOUR OWN WILL SO NOW YOUR GOING TO DIE...

Tom and Carmel tried to run but then something wrapped cold around Carmels neck holding her back but she couldn't scream because the cold was taking her breath away then the same happened to Tom but he was further in front of Carmel.

Carmel felt this sharp, metal, cold thing on the back of her neck the something like cold water ran down her neck. Then all you could hear was the sound of a CRACK as the spine of Carmel got cut through as she fell to the ground.

Tom felt the same but the sharp, metal, cold thing ran right down his back then CRACK of the spine as he fell to the floor the writing appeared again but saying.

          I TOLD YOU SO.

THE END

P.S.if this is coming up again it didnt work when I first time I published it didnt come as chapter 6

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