The Arch-Universe

Chapter 1 Forbidden place

"Come on Jimmy! We need to go right now Jenny and The rest must be already waiting!" Peter said as he ran up The stairs to knock on his twin brother's door , "I'm coming I'm coming!" Said Jimmy in a annoyed voice as he Pulled his shoes on quickly "Finally..." Said Peter in a relieved voice as he ran down stairs again , his brother running after him shortly after as they both shouted "Bye mom! We're going to hang out with our friends!" Their mother responding to it with "Alright sweeties! Just come back when it becomes dark!" Both of the boys rolling their eyes as they both jumped on their bicycles , riding rather quickly towards where their friends told them to go .

Once they finally arrive they see their friends frowning a bit as Jenny looked smiling towards Peter as Jenny asked "What took you two so long?" At Peter , Peter looking at his brother as he said "Well someone here took long with doing his hair" their friends chuckling in response as Jimmy shouted "Atleast my hair looks great now!" in protest as Peter ignored what he said as he simply didn't care about it , Joe who was Jenny's little brother said "I bet you do your hair a lot just to hide you not having a six pack" with sarcasm as Jimmy mumbled in response , Jenny saying "Can we go or are you two gonna talk more bad about each other?" In a impatient voice as they both shaked their head , Jenny smiling as Peter and Jenny started walking up front as the rest followed them Jenny saying "I hope nobody sees us..".

So that was the first chapter of my first try at making a book! Tell me your opinion about it or give me some tips if you please . I hope I can entertain you with my first try at a book!

It's short because I wanted to start the second chapter with them entering the secret place.

~Thomas