Okay, lets face it, i was in year 7 when I wrote this and looking back at it it isnt that good. But tell me what you think anyway. I'd love to hear from anyone x
Lois slept well that night. She lay with Eve, sleeping, covered with blood. Nobody came, nobody bothered them. The cleaners came in the morning, and then ran away when they saw the mess.
Lois woke to a loud whistling. Will strolled casually around the corner of the dark corridor.
“What the… Lois!” Will rushed to Lois and dragged her from the body. Will wretched when he saw the slightly decomposing Eve, intestines spilled all over the floor. “That’s Eve, isn’t it?” Lois nodded solemnly. “Come on. Let’s get you inside. Tell me what happened.” Will guided her into the apartment.
*****
“It was the e-mail.” Lois and Will sat on the sofa; Lois sat on a towel, so not to stain the sofa with blood. “It came, molly came. It was real. The chain was real. It came and killed Eve. I can’t describe it. It was terrible. I held eve in my arms as she died. Molly wanted us to help her but… she just got angry.” Lois sobbed in her hands.
Will sighed, “It’s okay…”
“No Will, it’s not!” Lois screamed. “Eve is dead and I’ve got some physco kid after me. Molly’s probably killed others before her.”
“Sorry. What are you doing about Eve?” Will asked. “We can’t just leave her out in the corridor on that state.”
“Don’t talk about her like she’s just a dead body. She was my best friend. We can’t just sweep her up and forget about her.” Lois looked into his eyes, full of tears. “We’re going to give her a proper funeral. No catches. We’re going to tell everyone at the funeral how she died. They should be allowed to know. Yes, a proper funeral.”
*****
The funeral was attended by relative and dear friends of Eve. Not too many, just enough to have a sad atmosphere and not too little for it to be awkward. They had to cremate Eve because; otherwise she would just be a bloody mess and probably fall apart. Lois stood in front of the mourning crowd;
“Eve was a good friend. No, not a good friend, an exhalent friend and nothing could bring Eve down. She was a cheery, loving girl who meant a lot to me.
Now, I bet you’re all wondering how eve came to die. I cannot keep this secret from you; it would eat me inside. What I’m about to tell you is strange and terrible and most of you won’t believe me. Only me and Will know why she truly died.
It all started with an e-mail. An e-mail we all thought was meaningless. But it turns out it was more than it seemed. The e-mail was a chain mail, ordering you to forward the e-mail, or a little, dead girl named Molly would come and pay you a deadly visit.”
“Please Lois; this is hardly the time for your foolish campfire stories.” Eve’s mother managed to snap through her tears.
“Oh, but it is. This isn’t a campfire story. This is the heart breaking story of Eve’s death.
Molly did come. It didn’t want Eve. It wanted me. It must have got mixed up. Molly killed Eve by… well… it’s really not the right time to tell you how. But it was not pretty. But after Molly had gone, I realised Eve was not dead, but dyeing. She did not spend her last moments alone. I stayed with her for the night.” The wet crowd stared blankly at her.
“You’re sick.” whimpered an old lady.
“Sorry?” Lois replied.
“To come to a funeral and make up some disturbing and upsetting story, obviously not helping any of us through our grief. These lies are hurtful, do you not realise?”
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The Girl in Chains
Horror***NOT FOR THE FAINT HEARTED*** After receiving strange haunting messages from no one, Molly finds herself in a position of unimaginable sensitivity. A group of zombie like creatures transform Molly into a ruthless killer filled with hatred. And the...