The Game of Survival

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The Game of Survival

By: Faith_Johnson03

Genre: Fantasy

Rating: 4.5/5

Review:

The immense power and determination that Amberlee has is so encouraging and empowering to anyone who reads this. Her character is so intriguing and likable which really pulled me into your beautiful storytelling.

The imagery used in this book is phenomenal and it feels like you are truly there in the caves where she was being held.

The different characters that you created are so different and in-depth that they all have their own unique personalities which is a hard task to do when there are so many.

The fact that Amberlee gets flashbacks is really intriguing to me and it brings more depth to her already fiery character.

I would say that the cover isn't as enticing and I would maybe have someone create a cover for you. The description isn't very enticing, gives away a lot of the story, and it also has quite a few mistakes. I would clean up the grammar mistakes and make the description a little more clear and intriguing. I truly think that if you work on these things then you'd have the read count that you truly deserve!

Overall, this is definitely a book that I would continue reading. You are so talented and creative, so keep up the amazing work!

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