Sinful Bliss
By @minxyjee minxyjee
Genre: Chick Lit/Romance
Rating: 2/5
Reviewer: ThoughtfulSushi
Review
While the main idea for the book is intriguing (reminds me of Gena Showalter's Lord of the Underworld series which I'm a huge fan of) the book is definitely a rough draft. You state in the beginning chapter that you are editing which is great! Grammarly will help you out tremendously with the editing process and future books you write. You may want to consider changing the edited timestamp seeing as it's a time and not a date.
It's pretty clear since this is a romance book that the overall theme will be the 7 deadly sins falling in love with (possibly) human girls. There are at least 8 central characters in this book by the 4th chapter. With that many characters, you have to be careful they don't all sound the same and blend together. Juggling the 4 primary characters in a book is hard enough and you have at least double that.
Editing can be disheartening and brutal but keep at it and shine your hard work!
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