"Loki! What have you done?" The portal guy, I guess, yelled. "What have you brought?" "I have brought my fathers love, and favor!" he says "Loki" I whisper to myself, recognizing the name from when he trashed New York a few years back. "You brought a mortal to Asgard?!" The portal man said raising his voice ever so slightly "Do you have any idea what you've done?!" "Yes, I have brought my father and mother a new servant! I've brought my whole family a new servant Hiemdalf!" Loki says plainly, and a hint of proudness in his voice "So be it! Don't say I didn't warn you!" 'Hiemdalf' said gesturing us to go across a rainbow bridge, we go across and Loki leads me (more like pulling me by my arm) to a HUGE palace and shoves me in and he follows. "Odin!" he yells as he pretty much drags me into the "throne room" by the back of my sweatshirt and an older gentleman was sitting on the throne, and a younger gentleman in a lot of nestle armor and a red cape was standing next to the throne. "Father! I bring you a gift!" Loki yells happily, and throws me into the ground like 10 ft. From where I was originally. I'm laying on the ground face down because I landed on the side of my face and it really REALLY hurt! I prop myself up in one arm and put a hand on the side of my face where I could tell it was bruised pretty bad, my eyes is watery and I try to conceal the tears falling from the eye that was hurt because I didn't want theses clearly VERY important people to see my weakness I look up to see the man in the red cape running down the steps towards me. "Loki! Why have you brought a mortal to Asgard?!" Odin ,I think, yelled at him just as I felt a hand in my back and I see knees on the ground with a red cape near them. "Are you alright?" a gentle but deep voice ask me, I nod. "Yes sir, I'm fine" I says whipping some of the water from my eye. He rubs my back and looks at Loki. "Why would you do this? Don't you see? You have hurt her!" He says angrily. "Why should I care that a puny mortal got a little bruised! I do not share your sympathy for mortals Thor! I have brought this girl as a gift for Odin, to earn his favor! A new servant!" He said to "Thor" He clenches a fist and stands up. "Listen well brother, While you may not share my care for mortals no one deserves to be treated like this, Hiemdalf is probably resting we will bring her back home once she is better." He says keeping eye contact with Loki. "Thor is right Loki, no one should ever be treated this way! Ever!" Odin says sternly. Loki puts in his angry face and storms out of the palace. "Thor please escort miss?" "Ellie" I say almost instantly. "Miss Ellie, to the guest chambers please?" Odin says "Of course father" Thor says and holds out his hand to me, I whip some extra water from my eye and take his hand.

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A Young Girl
FanfictionA young girl gets "abducted" by Odin's son Loki to impress Odin. Her, Thor, Odin, Frigga, and Loki all develop a strong bond and it becomes like she's part of their family