part 6

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Bihaan walks on burning coal praying for thapki’s life. He falls down.
at hospital,
thapki opens eyes. and breathe heavily.
kk and poonam enter the room 
they thanked god and says their prayers are fulfilled. thapki get into her life.
thapki calls bihaan.
hearing Bihaan  name,
kk gets angry that
kk:iss haal mein bhi tere zuban pe usska naam yaad aayta hai.
thapki woh ladka tere liye sahi kabhi nahi tha.
balai ussne majbore mein shaadi ke the saath bhi kahe haad tak diya magar at the end of the day kya kiya.
aapne log aayte he tujhe khud se yun door ki.sach jaan ne ke koshish kabhi nahi ki.
un logo saath deya jinko kuch dinno se jante hai.
tune mujhe nahi baataya paar mujhe sab kuch pata chal gaya hai ke,
jab se usske saagi maa aaye hai tab se usne ka  kiya hai tere saath.
aur kaal raat tujhe haath utha, bejazati ki.
ghar se nikal deya.
aur aaj yahan khada huya tha.
yese ladke ke pas mein bapas tujhe nahi jane dunga.
tujhe ab se mere saath he rahege.
bojh nahi hai tu mere liye.
wada kar bhula gaye tu usse.

thapki nods yes crying.
kk warns not to break her promise.
at dargah,
Religios person praises bihaan that his love is true, nothing will happen to his lady love, gives him tread and asks to tie it on his lady love’s shoulder, she will be fine soon.

Bihaan get a call from hospital and smiles hear that,
Bihaan returns to hospital and tries to enter thapki’s room,
but poonam stops him and asks if risking thapki’s life is not enough that he came back to kill her.

bihaan :aunty, main janta ho, aapka gussa sahi hai magar please mujhe Thapk se milne degeye.
ponam :ab kyu milna chate ho tum.
usse aapne paralyse se saaja tumhare dard chut de chuke hai Bihaan pandey,nahi milo gye,
abhi tum jao yahan se.

kk walks out,he seen them and says poonam let Bihaan go in.

Bihaan get happy,
he walks in and see a lifeless thapki
thapki look at Bihaan ,a song played in background.

Tumko dekh ke yun lagta hai
...
Koi bichda khwab aaya
...
Barso lambi raat se guzre
...
Subah ka jhonka laut aaya hai

...
Bahut der jaagi
...

Bahut door aayi

 Khwab ne na chhodi meri kalayi
...
Kab se meri saans ruki thi
...
Mujhe saans aayi
Mujhe saans aayi
Mujhe saans aayi
...
Saans me teri saans mili toh mujhe saans aayi
...
Mujhe saans aayi
Mujhe saans aayi..

Bihaan sit beside thapki and emotionally asks if she is fine now, he troubled her a lot,
now he will correct his mistake,
they will not separate forever now.
thapki, bhul jao jo humne kaha jo haine kiya,bas yeh yaad rakho ke hum tumse pyaar karte hai aur humesha ek dusre ke saath rahenge.
thapki says it is too late now,
tum jao yahan se mujhe tumse koi rishta nahi rakhna,
Bihaan :thapki, tum yeh kaise baat kar rahe hoon.
thapki:bihaan,main tumse ek sawal poucho ka tumhe lagta hai main tumhare kosi maa ke jaan lena chate ho.
Bihaan himself don't know what is truth or false.
thapki smiles little.
thapki :nahi hai na jawad.
tum jao yahan se Bihaan.
aur main yahe kar rahe hoon jo tumhe chate the,
tum yeh rishta torna chate the na toot gaya.
Bihaan asks why is she speaking like that.bihaan tum jante ho na tumhar Bihaan kaisa hai.
kk walks in and shouts what is happening,
if Bihaan wants to kill his daughter.
Bihaan :uncle dekhe ye naa thapki kya keh rahe hai.
woh mujhe agal hona chate ho.
kk:akhir kaar mere beti ne mere sunle, aur sahi fesla kiya hai usne.
Bihaan :uncle, aap yesa kaise kar sakte hai.
aapne beti kya ghar kaise tor sakte hai.
kk:main nahi, tumne khud aapna ghar thoda, main bas aapne beti ko iss goothe rishte se mujht kara raha hoon.
Bihaan pleads not to separate them.thapki helpless crying and shout in pain.

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