when making a PoV story please be consistent with the person you're following, I don't want to jump from Mydoria to 3rd person to Todoroki and then back to Mydoria within the space of two paragraphs
However; if you change point of view per chapter it's fine so long as you list who's point of view the reader is observing
and please stop going from first to third person, it hurts my brain
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