Pacing Stories

A girl named Ally had a perfect life until her grandfather was diagnosed with stomach cancer. From then on nothing was the same. I am a 13 year old girl and this is my first story I've eve written. I'm not sure if it's any good but even I'd it's not please tell me because I will change it. I love comments and votes and fans every time i get one i scream. I have one fan, because of my mom, and three votes because of my family. And 2 comments because of myself haha. I need ur help!

TERJAMIN! WA 0812-9627-2689 Distributor Tangki Air Lucky Polytank Sumur Pacing

This will be a mini thingy of all the stories I have written in the year. This is number one (: