The Clumsy Awards

TCA- Ch6.1

I got advised not to write in bold and italic and cut my sentences and paragraphs down, Do i use long sentences and paragraphs ? please answer my dilemma

so i won't and err there might be slow uploads i am trying to edit the chapters and make them better.

This chapter will be a really short chapter but i promise the next chapter will be longer and hopefully my editing would be finished so please be patient.

You know the usual please read, vote, fan and comment i really need to know what you think

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Chapter 6.1(Canika's Pov):

As soon as we stepped in the house Alexis practically collapsed, dropping my bags by the front door,

'Al be careful i have stuff in those bags. I cannot see why you are exhausted, we barley spent four hours in there' i say trying to suppress a laugh. I normally only spend one to two hours in the shopping center, but i deliberately went into most of the shops and tried useless junk on.

Alexis looked at me like i was crazy. His jaw hung loose his mouth opened wide.

'Close your mouth, or i might be tempted to put flies in there' i ordered. immediately his jaw snapped shut. He picked up my bags,

'Where is your room' he asked. Instead of telling him i took the lead up to my floor. I opened my brown oak wooden door for Alexis.

'Just dump the stuff on my bed. I advice you yo do your check thing quickly'. I reminded then turned on my heels and walked out. I went down to the kitchen to get snacks for us. I ended up deciding on two bottles of mountain dew and two large bags of onion rings.

I made my way back up to my room opening the door to see...