Gonna kill u

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"I'M GOING TO KILL YOU HARRY POTTER!!!!!" Then do it already! You don't have to explain your whole life lesson and stuff JUST to let someone escape. I mean, you can make a fight, or an unexpected ally (as long as they are not a were wolf) just don't make the villain get half a page of dialogue so the character can give them the butt whooping they deserve. It just makes they story boring, I guess. But that's my opinion. But I mean it when I say you canNOT just say
:||| 'I want to tell you something before I kill you' he said as I... Got the knife behind my back. 'The day you did this I went and did that and...' I cut though the ropes slowly so he wont notice. 'Cmshskrmdmsksjrnfhcjdndkslsdfjgjfcjfjdismdkak jfndnc....?' I karaté kicked him to the ground and ran away. |||:
Please don't. Okay I'm done ranting baaaiiiiiii
Xoxo lol
Diz

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