*For english we had to write a poem and present it to the class. i really liked the one i wrote so i decided that i would share it with you. please give me feed back*
before the killing started
the evenings were magical too
an angel-moment away
a slow sinking dream
fragments of window glass sparkle in the sunlight
a thousand fragments glistening like stars
a splash of blood on the garden
the shots echo forever
at the edge of the storm
the dark clouds darken through the sunlight
after a fight at school
the dead lying among them seem to sleep forever
a letter from a long lost friend came
her mouth is full of dirt
her face is dissipating
in other words, shes dead
she will visit me in moments
i've lost my innocence
she will be perplexed yet wise,
a dog barks and snow falls from a tree
she told me she'll come back
but really who would want to be born again
false we say
to feed the falseness, you feed only truth
