The Girls (Re-Writing)

Chapter 1

© 2014, Moquin Alyssa

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Liyla Greene

     I stare off into the stary night. I feel like it is later than it actually is. I look away from the window and at my clock, 5:37 P.M. My name is Liyla Greene, my parents both died in a car crash when I was four. My Uncle Frank is my legal guardian and he does a great job. I stood up and glided my way over to my vanity. As I looked into my mirror I noticed my freckles were hidden by my flushed cheeks. "Liyla, dinner." My Uncle Frank called up to me. "Be down soon." I reply. Throwing my hair in a ponytail, I stood up shoving my phone into my back jean pocket and traveling down the stairs.
   I quickly made my way to my chair at the table, right across from my uncle. "Hi." I mumbled. "Hello, Liyla." He replied. My Uncle Frank was a lay low country sort of guy. Ever since I turned sixteen and started dating my boyfriend Luke who was seventeen years old he has become much more strict. "Liyla,  dear are you okay?" My uncle asked concern coating his voice. Shanking my head and replying, "Yeah, just thinking about Luke." My uncle's face suddenly dropped. "Oh, fine." He rolled his eyes. I pushed my plate away. "I'm not hungry. " my uncle's concern was suddenly back. "Are you sure?  I can leave and let you eat in peace." I looked him in the eyes, "I'm positive. Please may I go to my room?" He sighed, "Go ahead." My happy meter rose, "Oh yeah and I'm going to Luke's tonight." He groaned, "Of course you are."
      I ran up stairs skipping steps. I ran into my room closing the door and throwing my used clothes on my bed, and running to the shower.

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Once I was out of the shower I decided it was time to get dressed. While wrapping my towels around my body I walked into my bed room and chose my black leggings and a grey shirt with my leather jacket mixed socks and my black converse. Once I was dressed, I decided to leave my hair naturally wavy and applied a light layer of mascara and eyeliner. Grabbing my phone off my bed side table and proud with my look I slide my phone into my back jean pocket and skipped down the stairs again.
   Opening the front door and seeing the time read, 7:43 P.M. "By uncle Frank!! I'll be back by 12 A.M." before he had a chance to reply I slammed the front door shut and decided to walk to Luke's house because he only lived a few blocks down. While I was walking I heard the pitter patter of rain drops. I groaned and pulled my jacket tighter around my fragile body.  I looked at the grey, unfriendly sky. It looked so depressing like a thunder storm was approaching. 
   I continued walking down the side walk my breath in front of me turning into white puffs of smoke and then disappearing seconds after the breath I exhaled. Then I felt a meaty hand smack over my mouth and I let out a muffled scream before I was chucked into the back of what felt like a van. I was screaming,g and screaming but then my eyes became heavier and heavier and then it went black.

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Hey loves,

    So yeah sorry that this was long only like 600 words. I know I usually do like 1,600 words or 2,000 but I am feeling lazy lately. I love you.

Bye loves.