Bsm you like another member (louis only!) #6

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Liam is your brother-you like louis

Your 17

*liams pov*

I know y/n likes louis I know it I'm gonna talk to her. "Hey y/n! Come here for a sec!" I yell.

"Yes liam?" She yells running up the stairs.

"Do you like louis?" I ask look into her eyes.

"Yes" she mumbled looking down.

"I knew it." She shoot her head up.

"LIAM PLEASE DONT SAY ANYTHING" she said.

"Why?" I ask

"Eleanor." She mumbled.

I started laughing.

"Liammmmm" she whined

"Y/n dear. They broke up" I say.

"Why" she asked.

"You'll see." I say walking away. Because louis broke up with Eleanor because of y/n. He likes her. I will never forget the day he came to talk to me about this.

*flashback to 4 days ago*

Lou- hey liam could I come over to talk to you? I also am wonder is y/n home?

Liam- um sure and why do you need to know is she's home or not?

Lou-cause.

Liam- well she's not home so come over I guess

Lou-be there in 20

I set my phone down on the table. Well that was strange.

*20 minutes later*

Louis came in.

"Liam mate look I broke up with Eleanor. I like your sister okay before you say anything eleanor is okay with this she saw how I looked at y/n and wanted me to be happy. Liam can I ask your sister out?" He asked and I started smiling.

"Louis you know I trust you more then I trust anyone else. You can ask y/n out. I'll help you." I say.

"Really mate? Thanks" he came and gave me a hug then ran out the door. Little does he know she likes him too....

*back to present*

I was walking with y/n around our neighborhood because y/n was kinda sad. Louis told me to get her out of the house at 8pm so he can set up her room romantically asking her out. I know louis won't do anything with her because they still really don't know eachother that well but if he hurts her I'm gonna chop his balls off.

*y/n's pov*

Liam has been walking with me for a hour. "Liammmmmmmm" I whine my feet hurt and I wanna go home.

"Y/n just 10 more minutes." He said. I'm very confused by that so we kept walking around a little more and finally after that we went home I went up stairs and opened my door to a louis Tomlinson kneeling in my bedroom on his knee. In a tux. I am very confused.

"Y/n we've known eachother for 4 years and you are my best mates sister. I asked liam if I had permission to ask you out. Now I want to show you how romantic and worth it I am so I bought you these roses and I set up a candle lit dinner under the stars and I hope you'd accompany me to the back yard. But please change into this and meet me down there when you are ready." He handed me the roses and kissed my cheek and left.

What the heck just happened. So I changed and walked downstairs into our backyard. I see twinkling lights with a table in the middle of the yard. Where louis stood.

"Louis you shouldn't have." I say walking over to him.

"I wanted to." He said pulling my chair out for me.

We enjoyed our dinner and getting to know eachother then my brother and the other boys came out all dressed up.

"Care to dance?" He asked.

"Sure." I say

The boys started to sing moments and me and louis slowed dance.

"Y/n will you please be my girlfriend?" He asked me.

"Yes" I whispered.

He leaned into me and gave me the most romantic kiss I've experience in my life. The boys started to cheer. I finally got my prince.

*10 years later*

"So daddy and you lived happily ever after," asked my 4 year old jana.

"Yes I got my prince." I said smiling tucking her in.

" goodnight hunny" I said.

I walked out seeing the smiling I love seeing for the past 10 years and he said "you told her the story again"

"Yes"

"Babe your too cute" he said

" as long as she doesn't find a prince just yet I'll be okay" he said climbing into our bed.

"Louis she's 4" I say snuggling up to him.

"Yeah yeah." He said.

"Good night my prince." I say kissing him.

"Night princes." He said

The end 😘

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