Jason (New)

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I was so goddamn proud of this when I first made it. Honestly, it's still really good. The one critique I have for it is his head is too big. Actually, I asked someone on Amino for constructive criticism and they delivered. Below Jason's picture is their improved version.

 Below Jason's picture is their improved version

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As you can see it's a lot smoother lines

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As you can see it's a lot smoother lines. They fixed the legs and feet especially a lot, which I couldn't agree more with. They blurred the shading and made his head smaller. They gave him five fingers which personally I don't think is really necessary, since four fingers has always been a cartoony stylistic choice, but they did improve the hand. I like how relaxed the lines all look, like with the hoodie and legs... most things, actually.

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