Before I start the chapter I just want to thank all the people who gave my story a chance. Seeing that people were interested in what the book was about and took the time to read it really motivates me to continue with writing. I got my first comment amd I was really excited!! Dont be scared to ask a question or point out a mistake. It can help both the me and you readers. People may wonder about something and want to know or maybe I made a grammatical error or left out an important detail.
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After "the incident" as I like to call it I decided to avoid friendships and the world. I knew I couldnt hurt myself or others again. NEVER again would I make the same mistake.
When I got home I decided to take a quick shower before figuring out what to eat. I was heading to the bathroom when I tripped over something and fell. I looked down and to my suprise It was my bag, the bag that held the letter that I had forgotten about. I quickly opened it and my jaw was probably hanging on the floor.
The letter said :
Dear Ms Morgan,
My name is Michelle. I am afraid that you might be in danger. Meet me at Latoya's in an hour.
I have alot of questions and I need some answers FAST.
I run down to Latoya's since its only down the block and see Mia sitting in a booth by herself. No one else is there except for the employees so I take a seat in the booth in front of her. "Hey Mia have you - " "I am Michelle. " she interrupted. I stayed quiet and she continued " I have been informed that you are in grave danger." Me? How could I be in danger I havent even done anything bad enough for someone to want to harm me?
Unless they knew.
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Immortals
लघु कहानीIf you had the chance to choose what power you could have for the rest of your life,what would it be? Brains, super speed, or the ability to fly? I would be Immortal. Well thats what I said before I knew what my life would be like.