Fixing the Creepypasta Crew

Jeff the Killer

I'm basing this off of the original story. Credit to Sesseur because they were all I could find when I looked up Jeff's creater. Ok now, to start off with a character we all know Jeff the Killer's real name is Jeffrey Dan Woods. In his story he is 13 living with his mother Margret, father Peter, and his older brother Lui. We all know how Jeff's story goes. His family moves to a new neighborhood, he gets invited to a birthday party, him and Lui get jumped on the first day of school, Lui gets arrested, and Jeff gets set on fire at a little kids birthday party. Then he burnt off his eyelids and carved the iconic Joker smile into his face.

Now let's go over what needs to be fixed. Well first off, Jeff has no problems with beating Randy, Keith, and Troy up. He was way too overpowered and we were never given any background information on why he was an epic fighter, he just was. Second, why didn't the cops do any type of investigation? Don't they have to at least question the kids first? This is why we do research guys. The third thing I wanna talk about is, how did Jeff suddenly start feeling the urge to kill? There was nothing wrong with him, his family was fine, he was literally just a normal kid. The next thing is, it would be impossible to carv a smile into your face or burn off your eyelids. He would have passed out from pain or died from blood loss, he would also be blind. In fact he shouldnt have been able to still have skin or hair after he was burned alive.

Now lets fix it, If we wanna make him more realistic then his backstory is gonna have to change. In his original story he wasn't written with a lot of personality, so I decided to use that. Like maybe he just never had the ability to feel anything or show any emotion. That could be why he is bullied, and instead of just being pushed and shoved a little he is actually getting bullied. Like straight up being beaten everyday, ignored by the teachers, and going through real mental trama. This jusifies his lack of emotion, gives a reason for why he is bullied, and makes him going insane more plausible. Another thing I didn't talk about up top is why his parents were ready to fucking shoot him instead of trying to help their obviously mentally ill child. If him and his parents were already distant and they were already scared of him, it would make more sense.

Now let's move on to what you guys really came here for, his realistic physical design. So my idea for his design is that his skin isnt bleached white he is just slightly paler from going outside less. Instead of burning his god damn eyelids off he just has really heavy bags and dark rings around his eyes from lack of sleep. I also picture him as having almost skeletal sunken in features. Instead of getting his hair burned black, he just dyes it black. I don't have a reason why he dyed his hair yet, but maybe it was just a form of self expression. I really don't know how to incorperate the cut in smile so I just decided he didn't cut in a smile. After he snapped and went on a murder spree, he painted a red smile on his face. I dont know tell me how you would work it in.

So thats chapter one of fixing the creepypasta crew. I did my best but this story really is a mess I didn't even cover everything that was wrong with it. Who do you guys wanna see next? Should I include my head cannons or do you guys not care? Tell me down below. (Why do I make these notes like anyone is actually going to read this?) Sorry if the middle name is wrong when I was researching for this it seemed like the most likley to be correct. Also it was never mentioned if Lui was his older brother or not, I just like to think he is.