Chapter 1 - blood stains the air (under editing)

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Hi! As I said before this is my first fanfic so please point out mistakes. There will be triggering content: not 100% sure what.
My chapters might vary a lot in length, so there's not really a consistent thing going.
Thank you for reading!

Start of chapter 1
(No pov)

The man in a crisp business suit tumbled down the artificially lit Main Street. No one was watching as he clawed the air desperately, as if trying to escape a mysterious predator. As he sprints, he hugs a worn leather briefcase to his heart.

Stumbling into a nearby alley, he paused for breath.  His chest heaved a he tried to pull oxygen into his lungs. "I-i think I lost him." The man panted sweat dripping down his face.

A cheery voice announced the arrival of the boy before he touched the ground. "Think again!" The voice called out gleefully. "Here I am!"

A slight figure dropped to the ground in front of him clad entirely in black and sporting two razor sharp knives. The suited man stumbled back and hit the unforgiving ground.

The boys gloved hand yanked the pleading man upright, and the boy grinned squarely in his face, blue hair flowing in the slight breeze.

"Hello!"

Blunette's knife hits the mark and screams echo through the alley. He pulls the dagger and looks in the corpse's face, a frozen mask of horror and revulsion forever etched on his features.  

Red spatters around the blue boy, on his clothes his hair, and the briefcase, which he now picks up. 

Red and blue make purple, and this boy is coated in it.

Blood pools on the rusted sewer and all falls silent.
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END OF PART ONE






Here we are! Part one done and dusted. Please point out bits I need to work on, and tell me what you think.

Potato chan

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