Complicated feelings (an Izuocha fanfic)

Chapter 2

All of class 1-a woke up and are ready for their field trip to the USJ just to find that a villainous league attacks them and seperates them (I changed this up a bit so that Deku and Ochaco are together with tsu because of the story) Deku, Uraraka, and Tsuyu or Froppy were stuck on a boat in the middle of the water. Deku started mumbling scaring Ochaco and Tsu but coming up with a brilliant plan to save the three of them. He said "Uraraka use your zero gravity quirk on me and Tsu. Then she will jump and I will break my finger to distract the villains then use it on yourself to float over them and we will escape to safety." They both agreed to his plan and it worked. They were about to escape when someone named Tomura Shigaraki found them and tried to kill Tsu. Deku quickly jumped out of the water and threw a punch at him and didn't break his arm. But, he quickly realized he punched the big bird instead of Tomura then All Might appeared and he wasn't wearing his usual smile.

All night was fighting black big bird when he got caught by it and then Todoroki used his ice and froze the monsters hand. All might was able to break free and punched the monster out of the USJ and then lost his power and turned into normal All Might and Izuku quickly realized this and tried to stop his friends from coming over there but, they were stopped by Cementos and were told that they should go and the situation was being handled. All Might thanked Cementos and Cementos was just happy he could help the number one hero.

I'm going to stop it here next time I will start with Deku and Uraraka I just want anybody who reads this to tell me what they think I should add and give me ideas of how to make it better.