STORY | What We Left Behind
AUTHOR | @stxrkissed
Characters
I love how you introduced the characters at the Prologue. You didn't give too much detail and it also fits the theme of the story. I have experienced that feeling that Fei Hong experienced during the Prologue, it's like I felt it as I read it.
Plot
The plot is really good, something like the movie 'Passengers.' You didn't advance the plot too fast, just slow and steady and that's good, it makes people want to read more unlike those who write the entire story in one chapter.
Overall
Overall, the story was really good and I loved it. I didn't see any grammatical mistakes or spelling errors, and the way you describe things gives a more realistic feel to the story. The only mistake for me is that you could have added a backstory so people can know what happened back then. You could have also gave a short introduction about the man that Fei Hong was staring at in the Prologue.
Thanks for writing this story!
94/100
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