STORY | Miss Perfect
AUTHOR | @BitchxPotato
Characters
I like how you introduced the characters in the story. Malkia was introduced PERFECTLY and her friends were too. Sadly, you could have worked more on the introduction of Marcus. He just came in the story and nobody knew who he was. Maybe add some description of him in the first few chapters?
Plot
I don't really see a plot in the story, more of a daily life journal. I'm not saying that it's bad, it's actually really creative and I haven't read anything like this on Wattpad yet. The story doesn't really need a plot, so keep it as it is.
Overall
I didn't really notice much grammatical errors and the characters were introduced well enough. Good job on writing the story!
97/100
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