Review - Girl Talk

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Hi there, love. Here's the review on your support/girl talk book. I feel like this is such a great initiative and you're doing a great job.

As someone who wants to help the community, I identify myself with you guys. A round of applause. 🙌

Now into the review.

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(1) 5/10

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(1) 5/10

As much as love you guys, I just don't think that this cover is working. I get the vibe and the aesthetic of the image, but it looks corny and it lacks imagination.

The flowery, soft and caring side of it really draws you in and makes you feel comfortable and appreciated since a lot of girls do love pink and find comfort in that color.

However, it's too pink. I miss neutral controls in there just to keep everything balanced.

The title is lost in there. It's really small and the font is not ideal. I don't get the question marks at the beginning and the end, at all. A typo? I don't know, but you need to fix that.

Maybe get a cover at a cover shop and ask for something with pink, gold, and white. I feel like that would look very nice. Keep the vibe, just change the cover to a more polished, neutral one that calls everyone in.

Anyways, you don't really have to stick with the pink theme. So I think that something more classic could work. Bellow, you can find a cover that I came up with a few minutes ago and that I think that it could also work in a Girl Talk Book.

 Bellow, you can find a cover that I came up with a few minutes ago and that I think that it could also work in a Girl Talk Book

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⏰ Last updated: Sep 16, 2019 ⏰

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