Don't Let Me In

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A scary text story about a boyfriend who sends text messages to his girlfriend in the middle of the night, warning her not to open the door for him.

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Gabriel: Nancy

Gabriel: Nancy, are you there?

Gabriel: Nancy answer me!

Nancy: Hey

Nancy: Wow, it's so late

Nancy: What's the matter? Can't sleep?

Gabriel: Nancy, I need you to listen to me carefully.

Gabriel: If I come to your house tonight and knock on the door

Gabriel: PLEASE DO NOT LET ME IN

Nancy: What???

Nancy: You're coming over now??

Gabriel: Nancy, focus on what I'm trying to tell you

Gabriel: If the doorbell rings and you see me standing outside

Gabriel: DO NOT OPEN THE DOOR!!

Gabriel: Whatever you do, DON'T LET ME IN!!

Nancy: Have you gone completely crazy?

Gabriel: Something very bad will happen to you if you open the door

Nancy: What's wrong with you?

Nancy: Why are you saying these horrible things?

Nancy: You're scaring me!!

Gabriel: Sorry, but it's for your own good

Gabriel: Are you alone in the house?

Nancy: Yes, actually... My parents went to a party

Gabriel: Ok well, then lock all doors and windows

Gabriel: If you see me outside, call the police

Gabriel: Immediately

Nancy: Gabriel, if this is a joke, I swear I'm going to block you

Gabriel: It's not a joke!

Nancy: Where are you?

Gabriel: I'm not sure.

Gabriel: I'm in an abandoned house

Gabriel: But I can't get out.

Gabriel: All the windows have bars on them.

Gabriel: And all the doors are locked

Nancy: How did you get there??

Gabriel: I can't remember

Gabriel: My memory is all confused

Gabriel: I think it happened yesterday night

Nancy: What happened?

Nancy: Have you been kidnapped or something??!!

Gabriel: I don't know.

Gabriel: I think so

Gabriel: But, please, Nancy. Remember what I told you

Gabriel: If you see me outside, don't open the door for me!

Nancy: Wait a sec

Nancy: Ah I see what's going on now

Nancy: You really are an idiot!!

Gabriel: What??

Nancy: This is just another one of your pranks.

Nancy: And to think I was about to call the police!

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