So Avery's house is like any other beach house but hers had a twist she had a garage that she could fix her board and a garage that she could put her jet ski and her boat in. Her room was like a mansion and she had it all to herself with a flat screen tv,a coach, an xbox,wii,and a play station. She also had a king size bunkbed and a mini fridge. she loved her room and when she had friends over she would get plenty of refreshments and food for everyone. Her dad and mom were divorced and she lived with her dad.
"Dad"said Avery.
"Yes sweetie" he replied.
"I am going to go out to surf"she said.
"Okay be very carful i heard there is a storm coming" dad said.
"Okay" avery stated.
As she took a deep breath and headed out she felt as if something was bolding her back but she brushed it off her back and just went on. She met up with Haley and they headed down to the beach. As they headed down Avery grew of concern the wind started to pick up and the waves were just big. As they got down there avery was a little hesitant to get in the water. Haley had no concern so she bolted in. As the waves started to slow down Avery decided to go in and enjoy the ocean. The waves got big again and Avery noticed but she had been having a fun time riding the waves that she didn't really care but she soon she will. The waves suddenly dulled and became still the girls didn't know what was going on. Avery just thought it was just a little pause which was totally wrong. then out of nowhere a gigantic wave forty feet tall came avery knows what to do but Haley does not. Haley starts swimming towards shore not realizing that if you do it would pull you under. Avery tried to stop but it was to late Haley had been pulled under as the strong current had pulled her under. after seeing such a treacherous sight she quickly started swimming trying to escape. She finds that the has crashed and that she is safe. out of nowhere another wave is right above her before she could think she swam up the wave trying to get the wave but she did not have enough power. As the wave crashes she is pulled under she is slammed into the water. she barely has any breath left she tries to swim up. She gets up but now somewhere she is not familiar with.