Ok guys first chapter of a hopefully good story
Jeff's Pov.
"Oh how I love whisky" I take a swig from my good friend Jack.
I'm walking down the road looking for someone who looks like they will be fun.as I'm walking I see a old broken down place called Freddy Fazbear's Pizza...hmmm..looks like a good place to nap I think to myself. As I walk over I see a car coming incredibly fast towards me and it hits me head on throwing me over to the curb.
"God fucking dammit that stung!" I yell as I start laughing hysterically.
As the people get out to look if I'm ok I play dead letting them get close to check me. Oooo a couple hehehe. As the boy who looks to be 20 checks my pulse I pull out my knife lightening fast slicing into his neck spraying his warm precious blood all over me...God it's almost like sex doing that.
"AHHHHHHH DANNY!"the anoying little bitch yelled.
As she went to run I sliced right behind her ankle with a sickening sound following which I loved. As she begged for mercy I sliced her neck soooo slowly as she struggled.as I got up I let out a maddening laugh. I walked around and got some more energy out of my system as I was I kicked something so I picked it up.
"OMG! Jack my precious you survived"I say happily.I was right in front of the pizza place
"Well what do u say Jack let's go get some pizza." I say taking a swig after.
Ok guys that was the beginning I want opinions on who do u think will win and if I'm doing good.
