Alright, for the few people out there who actually have read this and are waiting for an update, I know I suck for not updating but I just read through this and face palmed because oh god this is so bad. 😂 So much of it just doesn't make any sense, and there's so many things that contradict other things that I wanted to happen later in the story and ugh.
But for the most part just none of it makes sense. Like for one thing, if Emma JUST got into Storybrooke, then that means the curse isn't broken, right?
So then HOW THE HELL CAN ELENA DO MAGIC?!
How does she even know about magic or the fairytales or anything like that?!
I mean of course there's Henry who could've told her all of this stuff from the book.
But does she really trust her brothers word that much?
(Okay I just went back and read the first author's note but still WHY WOULD REGINA TELL THEM ABOUT THE FAIRYTALE THING?!) And oh god that whole thing with Baelfire not being Neal makes me so angry. 😂
I'm really sorry, I have no idea what I was thinking when I was writing this. 😂
I barely even remember writing half of it, LOL.
That was literally my first fanfic ever though, so I guess I can't really blame myself.
I've gotten a lot better at writing since then.
I'm working on a new fanfic, (OUAT obviously) and I PROMISE that one is a lot better. And makes a lot more sense. (It's set in Neverland)
I'm contemplating on just deleting this one, but if someone actually wants me to continue with it then I probably will.
Or I can rewrite this story completely and add modifications to it so it makes more sense.
Yeah, I think I'm gonna do that.
Anyway, thanks for reading and I'm sorry for any frustrations due to my stupidity! 😂
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The Voice Of Neverland
FanfictionThis OUAT fanfic is about Elena, and her brother, Henry. They're both adopted by Regina Mills, commonly known as the Evil Queen. They come face-to-face with Peter Pan, the darkest of all evil. Henry becomes unpleasantly surprised when he finds out t...
